Pretty decent
Just to get the technical stuff out of the way first, the soundquality was pretty bad. The vocals were very hard to hear, and the song just didn't come through.
That aside though, it's not a bad pop song.
Your song's a little off in places, but overall pretty easy on the ears. The guitar got a little repetitive, but on this kind of music that's not really an issue.
Like I said, it was kinda difficult to hear the vocals, so I can't really say much about your lyrics.
Anyhow, not bad at all, for a first submission.
Keep'em coming.